Thank you for sharing some of your favourite things. I like the way you have your transition set on your slide. You could think about the layout some more as it is all on one slide.
Hi Dante, I really like how you had a nice clear photo of you. I also like mine craft and jelly beans. What do you like to make on mine craft? Remember to make your letters a bit more bigger for people to read.
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Hello Dante,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing some of your favourite things. I like the way you have your transition set on your slide. You could think about the layout some more as it is all on one slide.
Mrs Krausse
Kia Ora Dante I like how you describe youself
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ReplyDeleteHi Dante, I really like how you had a nice clear photo of you. I also like mine craft and jelly beans. What do you like to make on mine craft? Remember to make your letters a bit more bigger for people to read.
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